Dream Biggest: Rough Draft sans audio/final scene

Dream Biggest First Iteration from Raj Brueggemann on Vimeo.

This project is nearing fruition, and I have about a week left to finish it. Compositing the shots into sequential footage was a much longer and more challenging process than I had anticipated. I spent a great deal of time testing out the timing of each shot. Some glitches in the project include:

-Timing issues
-render glitches
-Inconsistent color in some areas
-Some shots could be improved with detail

if you guys have any comments or feedback, I'd love to hear them before next Tuesday! Score and audio are on their way, as well.